A whole bunch of proofreading (#113)

* intro proofreeding pass

* what is gender proofreading pass

> (more about that in the Causes of Gender Dysphoria section)
Is it possible to make this link to the section?

* history of gender dysphoria proofreading pass

* disclaimer proofreading pass

* gender euphoria proofreading pass

Would it be worth linking to [the Wikipedia article for Plato's cave allegory](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Allegory_of_the_cave)?

* physical dysphoria proofreading pass

* biochemical dysphoria proofreading pass

* social dysphoria proofreading pass

I'm assuming the forgotten adjective in "surprisingly phenomenon" was something like "common", so please correct it if it's wrong

* societal dysphoria proofreading pass

> [...] (beyond the discomfort that women experience, as this includes genuine attention, not just unwanted attention).
Recommend rewording this, as it seems to imply that the discomfort women experience is what includes genuine attention rather than the discomfort AFAB trans people experience

* sexual dysphoria proofreading pass

* presentational dysphoria proofreading pass

* existential dysphoria proofreading pass

> Sometimes existential dysphoria can manifest existentially
strongly recommend rewording for redundancy reasons

* managed dysphoria proofreading pass

* impostor syndrome proofreading pass

> ***[YES, YOU ARE TRANS ENOUGH](https://www.amazon.com/Yes-You-Are-Trans-Enough/dp/1785923153/)***
do we really have to support Jeff Bezos?

* Update am-i-trans.md

"it’s nearly impossible avoid listening to oneself over others." has been reworded as "it’s nearly impossible to avoid listening to others over oneself." as the former seems contradictory to the rest of the paragraph, but I may be missing something, so please correct me if it's wrong

I also suggest rewording "I thought being dysphoric all the time was normal human behavior" so as to not imply that dysphoria is a behavior and therefore a choice

Also could use confirmation that "If you want to be a girl and you’ve always thought of yourself as a guy, then you will probably be happier living as a girl." is worded correctly

* Clinical Diagnoses proofreading pass

Some of these changes are to bring the wording somewhat closer to the text of the DSM-5 without making it too binary-centric

* missed one

* Treating Gender Dysphoria proofreading pass

"A newly developing area of bottom surgery is in AMAB non-binary operations which attempt to perform vaginoplasty *without* the removal of the penis. This particular surgery is extremely experimental and has been performed less than a dozen times in the United States, but the outlook for the future is good."
Highly recommend a source on this (admittedly mostly because it interests me personally and I couldn't find anything about it when I looked it up)

* Causes of Gender Dysphoria proofreading pass

* Chromosomes proofreading pass

* forgot some

* Hormones proofreading pass

* Androgenic Second Puberty proofreading pass

* Estrogenic Second Puberty proofreading pass

Removed dead link to https://youtu.be/OROoZzoVwfk?t=12

* Conclusion proofreading pass

* Patch 8 (#1)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

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* Patch 5 (#2)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

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Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>

* Patch 4 (#3)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

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Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>

* Patch 3 (#4)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

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Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>

* Patch 6 (#5)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

---------

Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>

* Patch 7 (#6)

* Small fixes and updates for the Portuguese translation (#124)

* fix(es): syntax error that prevented compilation

* feat(pt): add main text translation

* feat(pt): add tweets translation

* feat(pt): add PDF generation to GitHub workflow

* fix(pt): add misisng translations and formatting fixes

* fix(css): link fragment overlap with page header

* fix(css): add font Inter before Gothic A1

The Gothic A1 font lacks a few characters necessary for writing Portuguese, namely: á, í, ó, ú, ã, õ, and their upper case versions.

* fix(pt): remove 'Glossário' entry from _menu.hbs

* fix(build): slugify.js

* fix(pt): various typos and a few missing translations.

* chore: add .vscode to .gitignore

* pt: update index.md to match the current English version

* pt: minor fixes for que-e-genero.md

* pt: small fixes for historia.md

* pt: replace "gendrar" with "generizar"

* pt: more small fixes

* Hirschfield -> Hirschfeld

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Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>

* Link directly to book publisher's page instead of Amazon

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Co-authored-by: G Queiroz <gabrieljvnq@gmail.com>
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@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ Treatment options vary significantly depending on the individual person's needs.
### Social Transition
In a phrase: Coming out of the closet. This is simply announcing to the world that you are transgender. You announce that you wish to use a new name and/or new pronouns or not, you may just wish for people to know that you are trans and do not actually identify with your assigned binary gender. For some non-binary people this may not even be a full step away from their assignment, since gender is a spectrum and there is such as thing as a "non-binary man" and a "non-binary woman".
In a phrase: coming out of the closet. This is simply announcing to the world that you are transgender. You announce that you wish to use a new name and/or new pronouns or not; you may just wish for people to know that you are trans and do not actually identify with your assigned binary gender. For some non-binary people this may not even be a full step away from their assignment, since gender is a spectrum and there is such as thing as a "non-binary man" and a "non-binary woman".
A social transition is the act of stepping out of the closet, and it can relieve a lot of stress from suppression of ones self.
A social transition is the act of stepping out of the closet, and it can relieve a lot of stress from the suppression of oneself.
### Legal Transition
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ These are changes to how you style yourself, be it your clothes, your hair, or t
### Medical Transition
For adults this is hormone replacement therapy and surgery. For adolescents this often means puberty blockers until the teen is old enough to be certain of which gonadal hormone they want to have. For prepubescents, this is nothing. Let me repeat that again, since transphobes keep getting it wrong.
For adults, this is hormone replacement therapy and surgery. For adolescents, this often means puberty blockers until the teen is old enough to be certain of which gonadal hormone they want to have. For prepubescents, this is nothing. Let me repeat that again, since transphobes keep getting it wrong.
***PREPUBESCENT CHILDREN DO NOT MEDICALLY TRANSITION***.
@@ -42,24 +42,24 @@ Furthermore, no surgeon in the United States will perform a gender altering surg
### Hormonal Transition
**Masculinizing Hormone Therapy** (female to male sexual characteristics) consists of the introduction of testosterone, usually via intramuscular injection or topical gel. The increase in total gonadal hormones typically causes a cessation of ovulation, which is the source of the majority of estrogen produced in the ovaries.
**Masculinizing hormone therapy** (female to male sexual characteristics) consists of the introduction of testosterone, usually via intramuscular injection or topical gel. The increase in total gonadal hormones typically causes a cessation of ovulation, which is the source of the majority of estrogen produced in the ovaries.
**Femininizing Hormone Therapy** (male to female sexual characteristics) consists of the introduction of estrogen, typically estradiol, via oral pills, patches, or regular injections (intramuscular or subcutaneous). The use of slow dispensing implants is also becoming more and more common. It is also common practice to prescribe an anti-androgen to block testosterone production or absorption. In the United States this is usually Spironolactone, a blood pressure medication which has a testosterone blocking side-effect. Outside of the US the most common drug is Cyproterone Acetate, an androgen receptor blocker, which is not available in the US. Doctors may also prescribe Bicalutamide, which also blocks androgen receptors. However, some doctors may simply opt to use larger estradiol doses in order to cause the body to halt testosterone production.
**Feminizing hormone therapy** (male to female sexual characteristics) consists of the introduction of estrogen, typically estradiol, via oral pills, patches, or regular injections (intramuscular or subcutaneous). The use of slow dispensing implants is also becoming more and more common. It is also common practice to prescribe an anti-androgen to block testosterone production or absorption. In the United States this is usually spironolactone, a blood pressure medication which has a testosterone blocking side-effect. Outside of the US, the most common drug is cyproterone acetate, an androgen receptor blocker, which is not available in the US. Doctors may also prescribe bicalutamide, which also blocks androgen receptors. However, some doctors may simply opt to use larger estradiol doses in order to cause the body to halt testosterone production.
**In adolescents**, puberty blockers may involve the above androgen blockers, or if it is covered by insurance, the use of an antigonadtropin (drug which blocks the hormones that cause the production of estrogen and androgen) such as leuprolide acetate (a shot delivered every few months) or histrelin acetate (an annual implant).
**In adolescents**, puberty blockers may involve the above androgen blockers, or (if it is covered by insurance) the use of an antigonadotropic (a drug which blocks the hormones that cause the production of estrogen and androgen) such as leuprolide acetate (a shot delivered every few months) or histrelin acetate (an annual implant).
### Surgical Transition
Transgender surgeries are typically divided into three separate categories:
**Bottom Surgery** (modifications to genitals).
**Bottom Surgery** (modifications to genitals):
- Femininizing:
- Feminizing:
- Orchiectomy (removal of the testicles)
- Scrotectomy (removal of scrotal tissue, following orchiectomy)
- Vaginoplasty (creation of a vaginal cavity)
- Vulvaplasty (creation of a vulva, with or without depth).
- Vulvoplasty (creation of a vulva, with or without depth).
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@@ -85,11 +85,11 @@ Phalloplasty does not necessarily require previous hormone therapy, and while it
- Feminizing:
- Breast Augmentation via fat transfer or implants.
- Breast augmentation via fat transfer or implants.
- Masculinizing:
- Bilateral Mastectomy (breast tissue removal) with chest reconstruction
- Bilateral mastectomy (breast tissue removal) with chest reconstruction
- Breast reduction (some fat and breast tissue removal)
**Facial Feminization / Masculinization Surgery** (modifications to the skull, cartilage, and skin on the face).
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ Phalloplasty does not necessarily require previous hormone therapy, and while it
Other Trans Feminine Surgeries:
- Brazilian Butt Lift. Fat from the belly is transplanted into the butt in order to increase hip to waist ratio.
- Voice Feminization Surgery. An incision is performed in the vocal chords in order to permanently raise the pitch.
- Cinderella Surgery. Bones in the foot are shortened in order to reduce foot size. EXTREMELY RISKY
- Shoulder Reduction. The collar bone is shortened to reduce the width of the shoulders. EXTREMELY RISKY
- Brazilian Butt Lift: Fat from the belly is transplanted into the butt in order to increase hip to waist ratio.
- Voice Feminization Surgery: An incision is performed in the vocal cords in order to permanently raise the pitch.
- Cinderella Surgery: Bones in the foot are shortened in order to reduce foot size. EXTREMELY RISKY
- Shoulder Reduction: The collar bone is shortened to reduce the width of the shoulders. EXTREMELY RISKY