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public/en/am-i-trans.md

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ My good friend Lily coined the phrase **“Egg Prime Directive”** to describe
 
 When someone is just told they are trans, that opens ground for denial; it activates defense mechanisms built by internalized transphobia, and it has a high probability of pushing them further into the closet, if not making them outright transphobic. Even when it doesn’t, it leaves ground for their own subconscious to reject their dysphoria, claiming that they were just manipulated or deceived.
 The much more effective strategy is to talk about your own experiences with dysphoria so that they see the common grounds and come to their own conclusion about their gender. The code doesn’t forbid helping them to explore their gender; it forbids assigning a gender to them.
-Or, to put it more succinctly, you cannot be told what the Matrix is; you can only be shown.
+Or, to put it more succinctly, no one can be told what the Matrix is. You have to see it for yourself.
 
 I’m sure there are some trans people out there who don’t follow the Egg Prime Directive, but I haven’t met them. It’s one of the only things that seems to unify the whole trans community, myself included. Even though I wanted my own external validation more than anything, I now see that true acceptance could have only come from within. The only person who can tell you that you are trans is yourself.
 

public/en/biochemical-dysphoria.md

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ The intensity of physical and biochemical dysphoria is highly influenced by othe
 
 There are dozens of systems in the body that all work in tandem, and they all fluctuate from day to day, manipulating general mental state. This general dysphoria can amplify the affect of all other dysphoria. One day you can shrug off misgendering like it's nothing, and then the next it hurts like a stab in the heart every time. One day you see yourself in the mirror, the next you're staring at the old you.
 
-Some people experience this in a genderfluid way, with some days leaning male, same days leaning female, and other days not feeling any gender, or both. Others just feel it like a seasonal river; sometimes it swells because of rains up stream, sometimes it slows to a trickle because of drought.
+Some people experience this in a genderfluid way, with some days leaning male, some days leaning female, and other days not feeling any gender, or both. Others just feel it like a seasonal river; sometimes it swells because of rains up stream, sometimes it slows to a trickle because of drought.
 
 All of this is valid, and just because you feel very dysphoric one day and not dysphoric the next does not mean that you aren't really trans.